In class we went over commas, which seemed a little out of place. Then we had another peer review, which I always enjoy. The sheet we used this time was better for what we are doing, especially when breaking down the topic sentences and what goes into it. The class went by really fast and I read Fallon's proposal and it was on education in the Reservation about alcohol abuse. I have stayed with a friend of the reservation and my dad built a youth center out there. It was very cool that I got hers.